awww.. this makes me wanna cry.. i hope this isnt how you feel or isnt ever how you felt.. someone shouldnt feel like this.. its too sad... keep the poetry coming tho.. i love it!
much love
amanda

It's all true. :\

The person in this poem may not find themselves beautiful, but i find every line full of beauty!

I have been feeling exactly like this for years, so I can relate 100%....I really enjoyed reading this, so beautiful, emotional and deep, great job...
Maybe you should try to make your lines more even??? Just a surgestion....
But another amazing poem =0)

*Love sabrina*

THIS POEM IS BEAUTIFUL TO ME LOL

6/5 AWESOME

Wow, sweet poem..but sad. just always remember..looks and beauty are but an illusion..but its the glory of your beautiful soul, that matters.~~~
xxxxxweeping wolfxxxxxxxx

I like it

I love it...i feel the same way...im trying to get someone to notice me...a special someone

I love this poem.
Very good.
Very.. I dunno.. familiar to me? I'm not sure what I mean.. o_O

Feelings everyone feels at one point or another...... very well written.... just a thought: maybe you can write and sequel to this showing the beauty of this ecrtain coming through and having all their dreams about this boy come true

Another beautiful piece, driven by love and plauged with uncertainty, remarkable. *sighs* My sweet blush, where have you been? *heavy sigh*

Such beauty and emotion it made me cry. This poem is beautiful so the writer must be also on the inside and out.