One more heart

by undying blusher   Jun 27, 2005


One more heart
That beats no longer…
No one even knows….
His heart just gave up
S’pose it was his time
Already paralyzed and
He’d suffered enough
Been through too much
His heart just gave up

If only it were possible
To give up w/o leaving
Broken hearts behind
Because they did care
And yes, there were tears
Love had been there and remains
Despite how things have changed

He’s gone. He’s all gone now. May he R.I.P.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Aww..
    Tis very good.
    I wish that I could write like you.
    Or even leave slightly decent comments..

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    Aww..
    Tis very good.
    I wish that I could write like you.
    Or even leave slightly decent comments..

  • 18 years ago

    by shannon

    amazing.. i loved it so much you have talent..keep it up

    take care
    much love
    shannon

  • 18 years ago

    by DAYLON

    Your work is good too, and I like this poem. Also I have written poem the way the some of the yongsters use the chat.

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