Thanks

by kate   Jun 28, 2005


You're holding me tight.
but i am at the light.
You're calling my name.
I need you to know your not to blame.
My eyes are closing.
I am dying.
I feel you here.
I just want you to know ..
Thanks for being here.
I love you now its time for me to go.

Thanks to Stevie you helped me write it.This poem is to him and Jen and everyone who has took the time to help me.I love you all.Please comment,

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  • 18 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Aww,c ome on cheer up, be happy! hehe
    well good poem~!
    peace

  • 18 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    Good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Delo

    I agree about the last line

    it would make it even better :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesus Crisis

    great...excellent...i like it .....later

    -Jesus-

  • 18 years ago

    by Timothy B

    Last line, would sound bether if you split it in half
    I love you
    but now it's time for me to go

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