Suicide

I agree with all who commented before.
It was truly an amazing work. I look forward to reading more of your poems.
Much love...*Drew*

Its short and gets to the point there is nothing that i would add or take from it and i love it, i dont know if i ever got back to you commenting on one of my poems but thanks for the comment and you keep up the good work

Wow. That's all I can really say with this poem. Beautiful comes to mind too.

Rock butt girl you can read mineand tell me wht you think

You put alot of feelings and emotion in this poem with out over doing it, and writing too much. its very sort and simple, i love it!!

but if you realy do feel this way then you should look at getting help.

All my loving

Tim