by «-Pale-Petals-» Jun 29, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Her eyes were gems, |
by Krete
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The developmental pain in this piece is just so vivid and growing that I love it. |
by EpithetPoet
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A very intriguing poem. Starts off sweet and gentle, then goes off into depression. Nicely made. |
by Mj
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deep. really good poem. xox |
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its good,but u need to edit the ending. |