In The Fateful Hall

by VampyraKi†   Jun 30, 2005


Always hiding
For I am to shy
Always waiting
For you to pass by

Everyday like clock work
You walk near me
Every time I am to shy
And just stand there and see

All the other girls come up
And talk to you so calmly
Always I wish I did that
Then you’d look at me

But in the shadows I stay
Never able to speak
Every class everyday
Even every week

One day I might be able to talk
Then your enchanting eyes will see me
My heart will skip its beat
But the future is unknown

Behind me someone pushed
And I fell towards your feet
Embarrassed that you caught me
My heart skipped its beat

Slowly I looked up at you
Wishing my cheeks weren’t so red
To see a smile on your face
Sorry slipped from my mouth
Your ears its resting place

Slowly we parted like a movie
Me wishing it never end
I saw your eyes watching me
Even after I past the vending machine

When I came home
I wrote in my diary
And told that days
Fateful story

Ok this is the only love poem i ever wrote so be nice or harsh tell me what to fix and i will do so. have a good day and God Bless

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  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    That relates alot to me, hoping one day to speak to this boy who looks at me. Keep it up, one thing though, change "to" into "too"

  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    The flow and rhythm is kind of off in a few places, otherwise good effort there. I like the little story behind it. Cute and sweet. Oh and fix some typo error, like 'For I am to shy' --> 'too shy' and it will be great. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    really nice job! the rhyming was just a little jumpy in a couple places, but otherwise very good!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jason Meres

    Doesn't rhyme in a few places, but tells the story flawlessly for the same reason, I love it...truly.