A Deadly Betrayal.

by VampyraKi†   Jun 13, 2005


The thought of you leaving
and not being there
and losing something so precious
drove him to the edge

the fear he felt for your life
made him grab his knife
he wanted to cut the throat
of whoever made you feel the pain most
the night was soon to fill of hurt

all he wanted was someone to care
and he thought was you were gone
all he needed was you to be there
and all along he was wrong
you never loved him like you said
and all his respect for you is dead

those who turned you against him
were going to meet the end
and it was to be very grim
a slit throat or wrist or worse
stab their legs and arms so they hurt
watch them cry and beg and plead
he wasn't going to let them leave

a ruthless killer he was to become
and all for the lost of a love one
or should i say it was more the betray
that sent him over the edge to this killing spree

and yet he hated you not
or so thats what I thought
you got the worst on yourself
for on the day they caught him
he put a gun to his head and said

My dear i loved you and me you betrayed
and for your deeds it was they who payed
they wont see the sun anymore
and i know you haven't seen the end to the gore

and then my friend's it was the end
he shot himself right in the head

tell me what you thought of it.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    I think that you could have added a little more tword the end, but besides that it was good. I really liked this one too. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    Wow. i like this poem i enjoyed reading, keep up the good work.

    Emma 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    Great poem i like it alot
    very deep which is
    awesome
    great job and
    keep it up ok
    love always
    tabby

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Yea it was good but the rhyming thing you say you were trying not to be like anyone else but yea sorry to bust your bubble but i read a few poems from other people that were like that but whatever floats your goat i liked it anyways.

  • 18 years ago

    by VampyraKi†

    I did the rhyme different to catch people and not be the same as everyone else i was bored of the same type of rhymeing stuff so...yeah have a good day all