Comments : Before You End Your Life

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    wow...that was really good...it had a good msg nd it was very inspiring! love it!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very good message in this poem! If only more people would realize how much friends care! Good job! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow! i can relate to that. without my friends i prolly would be dead. after reading my poems i prolly dont seem like it cuz i always think positive now...even tho i do have poems about death and stuff....5/5! your an awesome writer!!

  • 18 years ago

    by kyky

    this is a really good poem i love it!!! keep it up!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    Hey I can really relate to ur poems and I really wanted to comment on it cause I love to hear good positive things about my poems and I am sure you enjoy it too. Also I know how you feel when peopel steal ur poems and it sux cause I know I try really hard to make my poems mean somethin and for someone just to write down and call it their own makes me mad...Oh well keep writin cause ur talanted and u will always have talant and shine like a star. Love Bridgette

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris Boesen

    wow I really like your rhyme scheme. I like how you invert some lines to make them fit. and you have good rhythm too. yea well it sorta reminds me of how, whenever I get down and start talking crazy, how my friends are always there for me. great poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by angie A

    i liked who you wrote this poem
    really nice poem

  • 18 years ago

    by *Unbreakable Soul*

    very well written Erikka
    it's true life is worthless without friends
    and good friends are fortune

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    Thanks so much guys. Your comments mean alot to me.

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    great poem, it gave a good message. 5/5 keep writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Rebecca

    I loved this poem.
    Your very talented.

    Rebecca.

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Butterfly

    Beautiful. I hope you can save someone's life with this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    I really enjoyed this poem, it has a good story to it, n is well written! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashli

    really good...i wish i could have read this when i was going through it, it would have helped alot! nice job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    Good poem, keep up the work

  • 18 years ago

    by Kia

    i like this poem it shows that even though you feel like there is no way out that no one cares there is someone you just have to look for them... great job

  • 18 years ago

    by XxXangeltearsXxX

    i think every person should read this poem, because it is such a great eye opener, and could change their future! thanks for commenting on my poem, this one is fantastic!

  • 18 years ago

    by ღ Christina ღ

    That was an excellent poem 5 Very true and i understand what your saying!

  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    WOW.. speechless over here... ummmm that was truely great and wonderful and idk it was just WOW... My best friend and I are like that so much!! i mean i have been the friend that needs the hug many times.. and she has also been that friend!! i mean we are always there for eachother.. and your poem it just really ..... idk how to say it!! but its like us so much and for you to describe it is just amazing.. once again WOW!! bye bye EJ

  • 18 years ago

    by RaNdOmGaL

    i love your poem it is really good!! but all the good times i try to think of just drift away because most of my mates have started to leave me and hate me, but i still have some mates and the mates i have got are very special to me, your poem is very inspirational!!
    luv RaNdOmGaL xxx