by Katrina Boblina Jul 3, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
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In the shadows, |
by Atomic
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At first I thought this was all metaphors, leading to something like the evil within yourself....then I realize, it has nothing to do with the title. =) |
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5/5 i loved that, it was very emotional and was worded nicley for the most part. |
by Nicholle
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i really like this poem, but i don't understand the ending. keep it up though |
by dragonfly
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That is so sad, did that happen to someone you know? |
by Natalie84
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Are you speaking of LIFE or an actual event...it could be both I guess. I like that. I was taken by the very first stanza and never lost interest. I love the way you worded it all....very unique. Another excellent write! |