Last Laugh

by Chris   Jul 7, 2005


**this one isn't really good but oh well**

a never ending pain
that grows stronger each day
i pray to god that my tears
will wash the sin away

i put my heart and faith
in your hands
but you had worse intentions
that didn't follow my plan

and just like that
the walls came down
the sky came crashing
and i let out a frown

i believed people were better
that was a mistake on my half
and when i get revenge
i'll have the last laugh

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  • 16 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    A never ending pain
    that grows stronger each day
    i pray to god that my tears
    will wash the sin away

    The usage of tears washing the hurt away used very well. Thanks again for the comment. Even though you said this one isn't done very well, in deeper thought it is. Revenge can be this simple and having these feeling of pain are normal but with the ending it just makes it worth everything.

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    WOW
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by iwanttobalone

    wow chrsitopher. look dude im so sorry that i havent been commenting. i was unaware of your new poems.

    i do still love you tho. just ta ler ya now

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    ooo.. sweet vengeance.. gr8 poem.. i still din reach that part of my lyf, tho.. so i cant relate.. but i understand.. ur talented.. keep up the gud work
    take care
    nouna
    thnx 4 commenting

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lucy

    wow i loved it, it wasn't bad at all, you undermine yourself!!! it was great and very sad, but it fits so well together

    very emotional

    Luv Always
    Lucy***

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