So Unreal

by Mark   Jul 7, 2005


We were best mates
Until he moved away
Despite going to different schools
I i saw him everyday

He moved to Twidall
And then to Park-wood
Further away each time
Which wasn't really good

I suppose its true
Tragedies bring mates together
But not for that to happen
I'd rather be friends never

God can only know what he must be going through
God can only know what he must feel
For he's life to change so terrible and sudden
It seems so unreal

At such a young age
He don't deserve to die
He don't deserve having to say to his loved ones
Goodbye

But i hope this will not happen
And that he will soon be well
As the pain that he is going through
Eclipses that of hell

So good luck Ash
I know your strong
You having cancer
Is unjust,wrong

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  • 19 years ago

    by Bernadette

    hey good poem its good a really good theme and the way you express it is really touching. i hope its not happening to you i couldnt bare loosing one of my friends! thanx for reading my poem!

  • 19 years ago

    by Brazon

    i enjoyed reading that poem it makes you appriciate the little things. i dont spose you could check out some of mine dome time. thanks xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Nikki

    you have written this really nicely, good flow lots of emotion! sorry if ur going through any of this. you sure can express it great!

    take care xox Love Nikki