Fall for you

by Britney   Jul 8, 2005


I dream about what we could be,
Could you really fall inlove with me?
The way you smile when I\'m with you,
The way you talk, everything you do.
Makes me want to fall for you.

Your going to be leaving before long,
How will I deal with you being gone.
Should I love you, or should i not,
Does this love deserve a shot?
Maybe I should\'nt fall for you.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This was a great poem and I agree with most the other people. It's a start. I've read your others and you could do better than a two stanza poem! Maybe just one more stanza, but, this is a great story and it deserves to be told, not hinted at! You know I love your poetry so, don't think I'm being mean! :o)

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    wow, Great poem. I loved it. keep up the good work.
    ~ItalianStallion~

  • 18 years ago

    by tabithaa

    That was short...but awesome 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    well written! I think it's a good length; doesn't ramble. You get the right amount of emotion across too. Good work
    sarahxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    i can definatly relate to this poem :) 5/5

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