Worth while

by The Poetic Child   Jul 11, 2005


I sit in my swing,
and look at the sky,
remember the past,
and then i realized why,

That i loved u alot,
for u are true,
no ones better,
its only you

I lay in bed,
and think of your face,
making me smile,
and have my heart chace,

keeping u close,
keeping u warm,
holding u forever,
never let a swarm

Me and you,
Will last forever,
ill never forget,
when we said were together

you will always be in my thoughts,
and picture your smile,
never letting my mind wear off,
cause you make time worth-while

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    This is a beautiful poem...i absolutely adore it lol...

    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by simply taylor

    that was so cute!! i like the way u could make me like picture it. i love swinging and just like, sit there and think about certain people. i really loved it.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Yes i see what you mean, Thanx though for the help, now i know what i could work on

  • 18 years ago

    by Catty

    ok...i'm leaving you a comment like i promised. First...over all i thought the poem was good. you did a good job expressing your emotions...now all u need to do is focus on the rymes and the flow of the poem...just a thought...i still liked it though

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