Overall, awesome poem, but the last stanza was confusing... "Now that you're gone, I promise my love for you will never go astray"? thats kinda confusing... like saying if the person was still alive(or there), then you wouldnt love them? im sorry, just a little confused x.x
Aww this is really sad....i really like it though 5/5 deffinately your a very good writer
Ps. I tried to comment on your poem called A wish? or something like that...but anyways OMG it was SO good it reminded me so much of this one night lol like i coudn't have said it better myself! ha i gave it a 5 too!
Thanks for the comment
This is extremely sad. But pain is a part of life, and so is losing the people we love. We just have to learn to move on with our lives, and most importantly live for those who have died for us. I hope all is well with you