Innocent Girl

by Kayla   Jul 13, 2005


Oh innocent girl,
So free and full of life.
What made you turn to tears,
And the blade of your knife?

Your tears, they are a poison.
They are acid on your cheek.
What turned you to this mess,
That pain is all you seek?

What happened to the laughter,
And the weekends full of fun?
That now your thoughts are filled,
With bullets and a gun.

What happened to your friends?
Have you turned against them all?
Turned to popping pills,
In your bedroom down the hall.

What brought you to disaster,
And to give yourself away?
To forget all your talents,
And make you go astray.

Did you do this to yourself?
Was this path all your choice?
Or was it another person,
Someone else's voice?

Are you really all that sad?
And too lonely to go on?
That your heart is filled with pain,
And the map is already drawn?

Is this really the end?
Is it where you should be?
Because I know how it is.
Since this girl is really me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    I'm here for ya hunny baby darlin'!!!! really!! Great poem, but it's sad that it's you in the end...(well, it was you in the beginning, but we found out in the end) You're a good writer! Keep it up! Love yas!

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    What made you turn to tears,
    And the blade of your knife?
    I like that line, the way you wrote that was different and good
    Your tears they are a poison.
    should be
    Your tears, they are a poison
    whoa, surprise ending, nice job, I like that, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    I say well done...I know many people who have similar thoughts and questions...and the last line was an interesting twist...

    Take care of yourself.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    Great poem.. I voted a 5! =D please check out any of my poems.. hugs!

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    Wow! This poem was amazing. I know how hard it can be once you turn to the blade, but all you can do is try to stay strong. I wish you the best of luck. Great poem. Keep up the talent! 5/5!

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