SMILE

by brittany   Jul 18, 2005


When I'm with you I laugh
And smile.
But there is a side
Of me no one sees
And knows about
I have been through
So much s**t that
I have learned to hide
How I really truly feel
So when you ask what’s wrong?
I just smile and say “nothing”
But when I get home
I just cry and cry
But you have
Know idea what’s it’s
Like to be me.
No one knows
The pain
And sadness
That hides behind
My smile

** ok i let my read this poem and he said it was the best one he has read so far. and after reading the comments i m going to have to say that it pritty good.**

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  • 16 years ago

    by 19Rusty

    This is a good beginning poem. It tells much about myself, I keep whatever negative emotions I have in me and never let them out, and you say it simply enough. But I think you should make another one to add onto this why you cannot let it out even deeper, and just plain more to it. I like it though keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    So sad. :(

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    I luv it it is so deep and so true!

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    I'm smiling, this one is nice and I like the style. Good write.

    Warm regards,

    Steve

  • 18 years ago

    by Avellana

    Of all your poems i've read, this is my favourite. You can really 'get it' cos u been through it too. really good.

    lv A, x

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