W/o me

Ahhh a type of poem that i could never due, i applaud you for it. Nicely done poem and i think that it is truely something good. But i am sensing a theme to your poems. I don't think anyone would be better off without you..i think someone would be lucky to have you even as their friend. Your a caring person and think your great.

P.S. thank you for all your comments, i tried to pay you back, i hope i have, i may IM you sometime, to talk poetry. If you don't mind. Thank you for the wonderful read.

Signed,
Dark Savior.

simple yet interesting xox

Simple, but great choice of words :) Nice piece, kind regards from kane

you always seem to suprise me. the way you write your poems... is so unique. its great. and you put so much emotion into it. great job once again!!! 5/5

interesting way of writeing it but its what it has to say that matters and it shows feelings and emotions!

Good jobz

-Josiah