The car ride home

by RachelAnne   Jul 22, 2005


I sit here in my place,
in this little tiny space,
All the while i think of you,
You have left... what do I do?

Grandma I love you
Grandma come back!
Grandma I miss you
Grandma my heart is black!

Inside our car i think about you,
Is it true?
I love you
Why did you leave so soon?

No one understands the love we had!
No one really cares

I told you everything!
and this is what I get?
I wanted you to stay
but thats all I can say

Im in the car ride home from seeing your body
I want to hug you and heal your limp
but all I can do is cry and think of our times

I love you grandma
and always will

*i wrote this on my car ride home from my grandmas funeral i was very close please rate or comment show the love if there is any

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  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    Wow death is so hard
    especially when your so close to eachothere
    but your poem was great and deep

    i liked it

    5/5

    lana

  • 18 years ago

    by *Amber Faith.* ©

    This poems is sad. I know how you feel my grandmother was like my everything before she passed. Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Aww hun that i sos sad!!!! It sounds like you put a lot of emotion into it.. Keep up the good work and I'm sorry for your loss...

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Really good poem, really sad, and thanks for the comment on mine i appreciated it alot,

    <3 Jess
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    So much grief and sadness, I'm sorry for your loss. The emotions flowed completely out of this piece.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve

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