Vampire Hunter

by Katrina Boblina   Jul 25, 2005


Heaven doesn't want me,
nor hell does
I walk this world helplessly
with only one cause.

A cause to which I despise
Hiding in this hole.
I walk the earth hunting
on the line, my very soul.

Vampires and vampaneze,
walking the streets
disobeying the hellish rules
feasting on whomever it meets.

A battle that even now
seems to be a dream...
or rather a nightmare,
this job would seem.

But I know my place
and why I am here
a half-vampire I live
These creatures I still fear.

Help me make the best
of this terrible place
help me destroy the one thing
we dare not to face.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Vampires scare me..lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Ahhh!! another dark one!..
    creepy!! lol but awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    The flow was a bit off and i found some forced rhymes....good story though....4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Hehe, liked it! I have a little fixation on vampires, Im afraid, and I really liked this poem,.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Interesting idea...im guessing inspiration was found in Blade...? maybe yes no lol i dont know thats what came to mind when i read it

    1st stanza didn't have a rhyme scheme like the rest

    Vampires and vampaneze,
    walking the streets
    disobeying the hellish rules
    feasting on whomever it meets.

    you change from singular to plural (first line and then the last line)

    great story line though minor things wrong with it.....good job 4/5

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