Reverse

by Suzy   Jul 25, 2005


What am I supposed to do
when it seems like everything I do
just seems to make everything worse
I'm thinking in reverse

I'm not trying to make things worse
Things just don't seem to be getting any better
Don't try to help me it's too late now
Stop thinking in reverse

Why do you look at me like you feel sorry for me
It doesnt make me feel any better
It just makes me feel so much worse
Feeling everything in reverse

nobody could possibly understand me
you're not the hero I've been waiting for so stop trying to save me
You're just making it so much worse
My whole life just works in reverse

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  • 17 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    3/5

    The rhythm was too rough.
    and I became confused.
    ~Emah

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    O0o it was a good one...It started off in a rhyme and didn't finsh that way...interesting concept...
    amandaxOx

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Thats a really good poem! So much emotion and intersting style. Amazing. Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Chica~

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    For your age, this is a really good poem. I'm giving you a 5, plus some tips.

    You're structure started off with 5 lines in a verse, then switched to 4 and ended with 1 (if you are switching make sure there's a pattern). Keep that constant. The first 3 verses ended with the word 'reverse' then the last one didn't (a bit inconsistant). The poem is good, if u took out the 4th line in the first verse. That will fix things ;)

    thnx for the read :)
    <3 Darien

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    This is really good, but kinda sad keep up the good work.

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