Act Like Men

by Mandy Lou   Jul 25, 2005


Why is there such violence
With all of this, I try to make sense
The guns, the killings
The terror, the willing

Who gave them permission
Who made this their mission...
They'll destroy us all
We're all going to fall

The hand of evil is reaching
I can no longer hear the preaching
Of so long ago
Now they'll never know

The generations to come
Will have a different kind of fun
They'll wreak havoc around
The good will run underground

We must make a change
This is getting very strange
Not for us, for the children
Stand up and act like men!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley_LOVES_Jason

    that was good... makes me wanna make my little brothers go pretend to be MEN!! lol.... good tho

    ~*~Ashley~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by ¤|ƒlοяεηζîά|¤

    I LOVE THIS POEM HUN!! =]
    *hugs* *mwuah mwuahzzz* lol!!

    hows m'baby squeeks?? miss you hun... i'm gonna be out for a while...

    Love ya, Flo

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Very Good Poem Keep it Up i look foward to reading more

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Verry inspirational poem Hun, underlining that we must act now, or dig our own grave. Great :D Kind regards from Kane x

  • 18 years ago

    by Zer0riginZ

    I believe tis a good poem, just one thing though.... YOU'VE got a few things from a poem I was writing but nevermind you may keep them. This reminds me of my style but very lil. 5/5 I think it is good, but if your going to write such things enrich the text a bit more.

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