Muted suffering

by Mark   Jul 27, 2005


People seem alright on the outside
But deep inside they are not
You think that they are loving life
When they infact want it to stop

To you they seem happy
Always wearing a smile
But really they are hurting
Crying silent tears all the while

Shutting everyone out their life
And feeling pain on their own
But it's not their fault
That they are all alone

They cry themselves to sleep
Everyday a fight
They are justing wondering when
To go into the light

People who know them care
But this they can't observe
Their tired of their life
It's on a never-ending curve

For themselves, they see no future
They want their life to end now
As they think it wouldn't matter
No one would care anyhow

As they end their life
From the spot where they lay
Their family and friends
Suffer every minute of every day

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  • 18 years ago

    by Mark

    thnx 4 all your comments, i'll check out ur new ones a.s.a.p

    love mark xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey, I loved this poem Mark.
    really great job.
    thanks for commenting on my
    poem.
    take care,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by tea lady

    wooooow great poem,rly like it lol :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Katie

    OMG! It is amazing how you can express everything Ive been feeling in just a handful of words. it is truly a gift. Use it well. Great write. Keap it up, anmd please check out some of my poems! Thanks!

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    awwwwww that is so sweet you wrote how i feel very well
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