Metaphorically Speaking

by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..   Jul 28, 2005


Strong as an ox
Standing as high and as proud as a willow
But yet, his weakness
is as soft as a pillow
Ready to criticize anyone
for the smallest reasons. Why?
Is it to hide away the pain
that he really feels inside?

She's as popular as a trend
Around her friends she holds her head up tall
to impress everyone
She acts as fake as a display glass doll
With the use of man-made products
She's as beautiful as a sunrise
is it to hide away the scars?
Is it all just a disguise?
An abusive boyfriend hits her
with blows as hard as cement.
Around others she pretends
as if everything was "decent".

A word is as sharp as a knife
if you speak without thinking
But who's to say?
Because I'm only metaphorically speaking.

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  • 14 years ago

    by Unforgiven Retniap doolb

    Definitly my favorite of all of yours it seemed to end quickly though like there is more to be said but still great write.

    I really liked reading yours poems...let me know when you write some more and I'll check them out.

    ~~~Retniapdoolb

  • 15 years ago

    by +-Unique J-+

    Yo Yo D na u knw ya poem is Hottt!!!!!! with 3 t's .lol....ya got it goin on ..n ya lyrics Tight!!

  • 15 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    lmao.. mayne.. you sucha ass hole

  • 15 years ago

    by -Beauty-

    Boring..lol..lol...Darin...lmao....gotta gey used 2 this..lol...lol..that poem was HOTT...u go girl...i mean boy!!!!!:D :P

  • 15 years ago

    by Ashli

    i love the ending...this has a powerful message, so good job! 5/5