To Offer

by Kaitlin Kristina   Jul 29, 2005


A promise now broken, cast against words once meant. A background of good intentions foreshadows insecurities; amidst tempered contention. “Please don’t beg me not to leave, I’ll do what I must despite your plead.” Make it harder, rub salt in my wound, self inflicted, misconstrued.

To be forever, to be tonight, enjoy me now, resist to fight.

Be that way. Go to bed mad. I don’t give a fukk.

For it’s all I have.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Good job, I liked your choice of rhyming and the words you chose, you did a good job, i liked it alot, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kevin

    I don't dig this Kaitlin. It reads to me like you are still totally caught up in the swell of this piece..and have not the emotional or mental distance to make this idea a good piece of writing.

    It has all the ingridients.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ben

    hey, good poem. i dont really know what to say, but nice work, keep it up
    bye bye
    Ben

  • 18 years ago

    by *Friends Are Stars*

    This is really good, i think i can relate xxxx

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