A Wishing Dreamer

by ├Truely_Spoken┤   Aug 2, 2005


© Francisco Guzman 2005

I wish I may, I wish I might
Make a wish for the girl of my dreams tonight....
... This is what I desire, The girl in which I aspire

I want to find true love,
In her eyes
I want to wipe her tears,
When she cries
I want to share every moment,
In my life

With her

I want to feel her warmth,
With every touch of her hand
No secrets will be kept from her,
Because she will understand
And we will engrave our problems
Upon the ocean sands

So not a trace of them will be found

Let her Smile be a symbol
Of what I have to give
Let her emotions represent
Her ability to forgive
And let me... embody
The chance of finding my lady...

Ooo, star that shimmers with the
light of the past
Grant me this wish...
Lead the path, show me the way
Allow her to be the guardian of my heart,
So it will never go astray

For I have not much to offer..
But my heart and soul
So let me promise her that...

Every thought in my mind
And every second in time
Will be used to find her

As long as my heart still beats
And as long as my eyes can see
Ill be searching for her

With every breath that I take
And every step that I make
Ill be closer to her

With every shimmer of a star
And as long as the sun remains afar
There will be hope for her

And may this wish come true
Regarding all Ive been through
Let my memories of a beginning
And all my fears of an end
Lie within the faith I have
In this wish

Once I find her,
I will never have to wish upon a star again
Because every wish I could possibly make
Will come back to being her

*Wakes up from dream*..
And realizes..

Once again, I am alone
In the cold brisk night
Waiting for the wind that is to be blown
Spending another day,
Lonely under the Moon
Hoping that one day my happiness will bloom

Here I am, only me
I have got the stars as my company
Watching over me
A star shines its blinding light over me

This is the tale.. of a wishing dreamer..
Whos sole desire, is to have you

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  • 16 years ago

    by dylyshus~(^_*)~

    Hi! WOW! THAT WAS AMAZING LIKE A DREAM I WAS IN...I COULD IMAGINE MYSELF BE THE ONE...WILL THNX FOR COMMENTING MY POEM I THINK IT WAS "SHOULD I" OR "YOU NEVER"...WILL N-E-WAYS I ENJOY READING UR POEMS...I WOULD LIKE TO READ MORE OF UR'S...SO TATA...

  • 16 years ago

    by nal2013

    Sorry it took me so long to rate your poem. But it was an awesome poem! Keep up the good work.

  • 16 years ago

    by BAYBEE GURL

    Hey
    you asked me to read this when you quoted ma poem..im sorry it's a little late you probably don't even remember..but ya..i really like you poem..you so talented...it almost made me cry lol..well i hope that that special girl will wake up and see that she should be with you because you sound lyk u wud take care of her
    =D

  • 16 years ago

    by FTS Miles

    I really appreciated the sentiment of the poem. It’s clear that you have a passionate and romantic soul, and I appreciate how you are authentically expressing yourself. There were a couple of grammatical issues that through me; those types of things always take me out of a poem. For example, you said “in which you aspire” when really you aspire to a thing rather than in a thing. If you want your poetry to be clear and straightforward, you were quite successful.

    However, never forget that poetry is a crafting of words to evoke a thing rather than clearly state a thing. Check out the lyrics on these two love songs and you’ll see the difference in how love is expressed between a more blatant description and one that is perhaps more poetically crafted even by the same group: 'Somebody' by Depeche Mode (because this poem reminded me in some regards of that song) or 'Enjoy the Silence' by Depeche Mode.

  • 16 years ago

    by gabs

    another outstanding poem!!!!

    good work!!!