Shut Up

by Carmen   Aug 3, 2005


Shut up...
Is that really all you have to say?
I tell you I hate my life,
That I want it to end,
So I turn to the knife.

Shut up...
That's what I get.
I now see the light,
The truth is finally met.

Shut up...
I'm so tired of those words.
Do you really shut me out,
Never want to know... why?
Ugh.. just thinking about it makes me want to shout,
Makes me want to cry.

I say I hate it all,
You tell me to shut up.
Now you'll see what trusting you has done to me,
As you sit and watch me fall.

Shut up...
I'm afraid it doesn't work like that, mom.
A mother's supposed to listen,
Not push her daughter away.
I see the blood now, it glistens..
Flowing..
Growing,
Leaking faster and faster.
The light is fading.

You could have saved me,
I didn't have to die.
Every time I tried to tell you,
This was all you'd cry;
Shut up.

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  • 17 years ago

    by -Ѕнэ đιεđ ѕсѓεάміηĝ-

    Hey great poem, you wrote it really well. great rhyming!
    love mel

  • 18 years ago

    by oldthings

    Ya, my mothers a bi%ch too. i think they enjoy hurting us, im right there with you though, sucks when they dont listen to us. loved the poem. 5/5 :)

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    Great poem, nicely done. I can almost relate, though I'm not.. suicidal. I just feel like my parents don't care. 5/5, good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Nice job withthe poem iam sorry such a sad poem had to be made on mt birthday but it's kool lol.. i hope you ok nice poem 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by Donna

    I am going through a very simialar thing in my life right now. I wouldnt call it a phase because I dont know how long it will last, but anyways I asked my mom for help and she said she didnt want to pay the hospital BILLS! I cut my wrist in front of her and she took the knife and told me to go to my room and put a band aid on it......I feel the motherly love.

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