Skin Deep

by Absinth Eyes   Aug 5, 2005


Oh yes I see your stunning beauty
So brightly and vainly shining
And yes I saw those sparkling eyes
Hiding far within all that you knew best

The tortured regret you tried to forget
That you try so hard and cover so well
With your black lashes and crimson lips
A carefully painted cosmetic mask

It doesn't tell them that you need help
Or how your insides were hollowed of emotion
How you're alone and you're dead inside
How a single saline tear could ruin your disguise

Your red lips curl into smiles so sweet
Smoothing away the screaming thoughts in your head
Glossing over the fact that you're not perfect
Telling them wonderous lies through your white skin

They'll never see through the blush on your cheeks
The pain slowly consuming your all
The hurt growing beneath those eyes
That glow and glimmer in envy green

You're drowning gracefully in suffering
But I can't reach far enough to help you out
The most beautiful empty case I've ever seen
Slowly filling up with dark despair

I see it swimming into the windows of your soul
Your face quickly changes into something more dark
A tear slips from your painted right eye
And I wipe it gently from my left

Dropping the mirror and feeling the break
I close the perfectly made up eyes
As I leave behind a shattered reflection
In a sharp mosaic of shattered glass

~~I wrote this while listening to this angry song and putting on make-up... inspiration is a strange thing.~~

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  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Yo the way u gave imagery to the readers is just so fantastic! GREAT poem

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    Wow! another good one....the last stanza got me becuz at first, I thought you were talking about someone else!
    Great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Broken Angel

    I love this p[oem EXCELLENT JOB

    *amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetic Tragedy08

    You're writing has always impressed me, and you've always been an author i like to read your poems on, its very well written! poems dont have to rhyme to be great, and to be flat out and honest it was AWESOME!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Virginia

    Thanks for pointing out my spelling mistake. Great poem. Really feeling it.

    Virginia