Your Other Side

by InMyWorld   Aug 7, 2005


Note: this is a song.

So, tear open the wound again
it was never healed anyway
why not, cut deeper, without a thought
then take it all back

you made your assumptions
you didn't welcome truth
now just leave me be
you've said enough

i love your way of turning things around
you never did fail to make me cry
the harsh words, your verbal abuse
is this your idea of fun?

stop with your games, i won't give in
you shouldn't treat me this way
no one deserves that, my love
and you're not worth this pain

**please rate and comment it would mean a lot to me, i'll be sure to return the favor**

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  • 18 years ago

    by Little Dot

    Wonderful job on this poem, it has a good rhymthe going on. I can relate to this poem really well. Keep up the great work.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Very good poem it flows very well and has a great structure.

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Thats really deep and your great at writing. I hope everything gets better for you.

  • 18 years ago

    by stephanie

    wow i came in here 2 return the favor of commenting on ur poems and say thanku 4 commenting on mine but this poem right here got the best of me its really good and i can relate alot keep up the good work and im in the process of writing a part 2 onto my poem right now

  • 18 years ago

    by Tainted Beauty

    wow...that reminds me of what ive been going through. good job i really liked that

    comment on my poem do you want please, it would mean alot to me :) <3<3

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