Stolen heart

by Mark   Aug 9, 2005


I'm slowly dying
Without my heart
Forget finishing this race
I can barley start

The first time i saw you
Those many years ago
I was soon to realize
That in my life was a hole

How did it get there?
Why wasn't it there before?
Please fill it for me
So it's not there anymore

When i looked into your eyes
And you looked into mine
You took something from me
And i no longer felt fine

What did you take?
You took my heart
And instead of being careful with it
You tore it apart

Only two options were open
Take it back, or take yours to
But there was no choice to make
I knew i wanted you

The feeling wasn't quite mutual
But my heart you wouldn't set free
Its like me suffering
Was what you wanted to see

Blood is pouring out of me
From this gaping hole
My heart has stopped ticking
Without you to make me whole

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  • 18 years ago

    by inlove

    Aww i hope she soon feels the same as u.
    and like u said to me....
    i hope u find someone as special as YoU!

    i didnt want to go out with him,
    cause i didnt want to become like him,
    with the things that he done and yeh...
    i was startin to think that wat he was doin in his life like drugs... was more important then me.
    and im goin through a really hard time at the moment and i just need a friend or someone to tell me that they love me,
    and actually mean it from there heart not just say it for the sake of sayin it.
    im scared!
    alot of things are happenin in my life at the moment,
    my best fren is in the hospital, his got somethin wrong with his head,
    my nan is really sick,
    i feel dumb for dumpin alex(my boyfren)
    but i kno i had to do it...
    and im not gettin along with one of my frens from school.....
    so i need someone to tell me from there heart that they love me and they are always here for me,
    and i was hopin alex would be the one to say it, but i was wrong....
    sooooo yeh...
    sorry for sayin this to u,
    u probably dont wanna hear it.
    sorry...

    wellz great poem! keep it up.
    and please reply to me as soon as u get this..
    thanks for being there mark!

    love always sam xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Sweet Aroma

    I liks this poem. It's tuff when you love some one who doesn seem to love you back

  • 18 years ago

    by *rach*and*bee*

    wow..........you have awesome poems here.........so much talent......you know how to express yourself.....i love this poems.....shit, I love all your poems.....keep up the great work....thank you so much for reading/rating/messaging my poem it really means a lot to me....ur welcome to read more....
    XOXO
    !*!Bee!*!

  • 18 years ago

    by obsessedgurl

    wow dude the same happened to me i so know how u feel!

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    aw.. this is soo cute.. but soo sad... hope your heartbrake heals soon.. lol =p