Ripped Times

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 15, 2005


All those times
When you said you'd die
Just for me alone
Made me silently cry

All those times
You wanted to be with me
Me and no one else
So I can no longer see

What happened?
You no longer feel
Strong towards me
This broken seal

We were so tight
You even cared
No one came close
No one could compare

Do you still feel this?
Or see my eyes?
Because you don't know
How hard I've cried

Blood to blood
Tear to tear
Life to life
Love no longer near

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  • 18 years ago

    by FAKE-is-the-new-trend

    I luv the last stanza

    " blood to blood,
    tear to tear,
    life to life,
    love no longer near"

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Aww this is so amazing, I love it!!! A poem that many people can relate to, including me....very emotional and deep, you did a great job

    thanks for all of your comments, I really appreciate it =0)

    *Hugs sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    The begining was a little rough, but the last few paragraphs were really good. keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Synyster

    It was a little weak at first, but you finished strong - especially your last stanza "Blood to blood, tear to tear, life to life, love no longer near" Keep working on it and expand on the idea some more, and this will be a great poem.

    XxX))Eclipse((XxX

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    flow was a bit off but great job..true emotion...keep it up...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

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