I'm sorry ..

by ღ*KiM*ღ   Aug 16, 2005


I'm sorry mummy please don't cry
This is how it had to be
I'm sorry mummy please look away
This isn't what I want you to see

I'm sorry daddy please don't cry
I'm still your little girl
I'm sorry daddy it's not your fault
Don't let your life unfurl

I'm sorry Grandma please don't cry
No need to watch anymore
I'm sorry Grandma I know it's too soon
But we'll be together like before

I'm sorry Granddad please don't cry
I'll always be your cupcake
I'm sorry granddad I'll be ok
Please don't keep yourself awake

I'm sorry little sister please don't cry
Don't make the mistakes I did
I'm sorry little sister you're stronger than me
Maybe one day you can forgive

I'm sorry my angel please don't cry
My best friend you'll always stay
I'm sorry my angel you couldn't have helped
I'll watch over you every day

I'm sorry everyone please don't cry
I couldn't take this much more
I'm sorry everyone my soul was breaking
Between this state of war

I'm sorry life please don't cry
It's now my time to leave
I'm sorry life it's time to go
As I silently pull down my sleeve

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  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This was really really well written and so sad!!
    i loved the flow and you ould tell your heart was in it :|

    x)

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl.. That poem is a heartbreaker. But I still absoluetly loved it. I can tell that you put alot of emotion into it and thats what made it so great! Great Job cannot wait to read more of your work. I would have given it a 6 xox Britney xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    Is this a cutting/suicide poem? If it was it was beautifully rendered and disguised. The personal note to all these important people in your life was very poignant, and you managed to do it while you rhyme, good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    that was really good. maybe some work on some of the rymes? oh well, probably just me!

  • 18 years ago

    by lostlllsoul

    nicely written
    ur really talented
    lots of love
    if could.. pls check out my poems
    thanx and smile always

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