Nothing is more important in life, than life itself

by Mark   Aug 16, 2005


Pain is something we all feel
Life can sometimes be a raw deal
Enduring it will be a challenge
And by no means easy
Survive and hold out
Ebb, no believe me

Days may take forever to pass
Only never doubt, that you can last
Nothing is more important in life
Than life itself

Don't decide you want to hurt your arm
Open up to someone, relax, be clam

It, your pain, may then be eased
Till it no longer exists, ceased

And don't make cuts so there is
Nothing left but telling scars
Defeat the temptation
Rise like the stars
Every cut will make it worse
And this time, it you may be unable to nurse

*written for andrea (read capitals down the side)*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley

    OMG!!!that's amazing!!!!!! I hd no Idea it was an acrostic poem until you mentioned it at the bottom!!! amazong

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    Great acrostic(sp?) poem!
    I havn't seen one this good since Bob shanks lol.
    It has great meaning and shows how much you care for her :D
    flowed really well which arostic don't always so its a bonus :]

    well written keep it up.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    so true and you wrote it beautifully.

    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by inlove

    wow awesome poem!
    andrea, must b so happy to have u as her friend!! :)

    Love Sam xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    amazing and inspirational... keep up the excellent work!
    -xXx-