The Release

by Ashley Dulin   Aug 17, 2005


I close my eyes and take a breath
finally released from my temporary death
Although we had such love for one another
I thought at first it would never faulter,
sadly mistaken we all were
as our relationship went through the chipper
day by day, I see it now,
why we didn't take that vow
throughout our life we would have been stuck
working our way through the muck
unable to rely upon each other and each passing
day, I grow As the analytical Virgo, I should have seen it coming,
braced myself in the for the forthcoming
expected you to walk away I shouldn't even have bothered trying
to make you stay for the first time in years
I was able to actually stop the tears
bring forth the smiles,
and step back into my old lifestyles
the one everyone loved through and through
I step into the light and feel the heat and smile to myself,
and once again be upbeat for the first time in years
I'm ableable to face my fears,
Now that you have set me free Alone in this world I felt
I'de Until i was able to actually look around
the entire sight is completely confound
to be alone without you at my side
and actually be able to find one that can provide
the one that can make me happy
with out being too sappy.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    long poem but well worth reading to the bottom. Great poem full of talent. Keep writing....... well done :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Feline Fatigue

    some of it was hard for me to understand, but that's just me! it was good! 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Your rhymes were good. It was kind of all over the place because there was no structured verse. It was still awesome though. I never really rate people a 4, unless I didn't like it. I believe leaving a comment on hwo to help is good enough. All poetry is good, in their own way. :D