My perfect dream

by ButterflyKisses_xo   Aug 22, 2005


*LONG BUT PLEASE READ ALL OF IT! I'll return favor!!*

Dear Diary,

Today I had some fun,
yes it was for real,
I danced with my love,
Now theres blisters on my heals.

I ran through a field,
full of flowers and tiny bugs,
I fell back,
but I was caught,
I'm now open to trust.

Me and mom spent a few hours,
laughing and living like we should,
She loves me,
and I've got a thousand ways to prove..

Me and my best friend,
went out to have some fun,
we laughed like we should,
We're happy till the end.

Daddy's no longer mean,
me and him went out all night,
together we each smiled,
we promised no more fights.

Sissi came back home,
and every things OK,
Her husband will no longer,
be living in her way.

I stayed up and watched the stars,
glisten from up above,
today I had the best time,
but be carefull,
read the rest of this rhyme..

I now have the perfect life,
everything will be OK,
I no longer have to say
"God please take me away."

But now I open my eyes,
as I hate to say,
I've just awoken,
from my perfect dream..

*R/C..It'd mean a lot to me!*

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  • 18 years ago

    by xThexForgotten1x

    This poem is WONDERFUL is so intence kayal likes it! lol keep up on your nice writting skills I love it

  • Its a great write as u can see from the comments!!!!!!!!!! i love it!!!! sounds like my life!!!!!!!!!!!!! 5/5
    ~*SaRaH*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Drugs && Hugs

    This was really good. I wish my dreams were this good but most of my dreams reflect my life... anyway I loved it lots... 5/5

    ~Suicidal Tears~

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Lisa

    Hey! I can't tell you how much I can relate to this poem! I liked it allot! Really well written! 5/5 for sure . . . Keep writing!
    *Lisa*

  • I Liked It, It Was Diffrent Yet So Beautiful, I Admire The Way You Write 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo