Comments : Try This, Please

  • 18 years ago

    by Vegetable

    This is really inspirational...I love it! Can I hang it in my locker? lol. good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Nice job hun xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Thats a really cute poem. Keep writing. 5/5

    *~JAMIE~*

  • 18 years ago

    by fallentears

    This such an amazing poem. Keep it up your a really talented writer xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    Beautiful & very creative. =]

  • 18 years ago

    by RObC

    Great!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Oh this was awsome. so beautiful. so TRUE. so REAL. i feel related to it, i feel very identified with it, great great great job. i like how u write. ure very talented.

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by Alyssa

    This is very nice.

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Hey Gorgeous! I don't know if you remember me, I was the user BlOoDy AnGeL! I've been looking for you and here I see you have started a club and everything! And your poems are great! Just missing you, and wanting to say hi again! ^ ^

    -Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Ariana

    This is sweet and optimistic, I found it quite refreshing.

  • 18 years ago

    by Spoken Silence

    All statements i completely agree with and spoken with such intergrity..... i have actually said some of these lines to my friends who needed a little help (hope you don't mind).... anyways very nicely done as ive always said "if everyone smiled by being give just one smile then everyone in the world should be smileing"

  • 17 years ago

    by Shawn Williams

    This is a terrific poem. Unique style with a terrific positive message.

  • 15 years ago

    by Michaela T

    Wow !!! Absolutely amazing....I love it!!! I really do...So inspiring!!! keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by Filledwithjoy

    So so so soSO GOOD!!

  • 13 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Thank you, dear.