Heartbeat in Time

by Poetic Tragedy08   Aug 23, 2005


"Forever spend
My life with you
That's exactly
What I want to do"

I responded in shock
But fell in love
Wanting to know
Life up above

My heart skipped
Just a few beats
When I could feel
Your body heat

I slowly put
My head to your heart
That's when I knew
This was a brand new start

Feelings so strong
No love can compare
And nothing tough
Enough to tear

Invincible heart
Unbreakable bond
Beating hearts
Where love is so strong

Two souls
Living off me and you
So finally
Our love is true

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  • 18 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Great job! It's very unique. I like how you began the poem with quotations.
    -Kate

  • 18 years ago

    by Emilia

    Wow.. very good.. 5 stars!

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    :-) This poem's really sweet! I like how you ended this poem, really nice. I like the "brand new start" that you used, its very original!

  • 18 years ago

    by BECCA lessTHANthree

    Aw.. thats soo sweet.. awesome job!!