Our Friendship is Dying

by Katrina Boblina   Aug 24, 2005


All I want in life is to be happy
It seems funny to me.
Every time I get ahead.
How fu cked things can be.

Theres a war between us
and it hurts me to say
It's forgetting each other
that will be the only way.

screaming inside
your beating me down
so I pray, go away
beating me into the ground.

I tell my lies and I despise.
Every second we are together
My heart inside is constantly hating.
To my heart I must be true, forever.

You would have never known.
What I've done for you.
What you have put me through.
I'd do it for you.

I could have never lived.
If it wasn't for you.
I try to hide the hate,
the hate you share too.

What does it mean to you?
As I fight my way through.
Our friendship is slowly dying
And I'm hating that fact too.

I don't know about you
but I miss the way it used to be
I want to stop these fights
And the pain I hide, I want you to see.

Should I take all the stupid bull sh it
All of us wanna die.
The pressure's tightening.
I don't even want to try.

I want this to go away
I can't stand what's going on
I am crumbling under pressure
I can't go living on...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    This was good as well great flow rhymes seemed effortless

    screaming inside
    your beating me down
    so I pray, go away
    beating me into the ground.

    that my favorite stanza it reminded me of a korn song lol

    very good job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    Deep, very deep. I liked the air of indecision. very nice, that.
    You seemed to not give very much description, which leaves a lot to the imagination, which is nice.

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Nice poem, reminded me so much of my friendship and how much it is slowly dying right before my very eyes.

    My favourite lines were:

    "I want this to go away
    I can't stand what's going on
    I am crumbling under pressure
    I can't go living on...."

    5/5

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Very good poem i like the way you write 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    Okay um first thing this isnt relevent really but on mine you said something about the swear word...was it because it disrupted the flow? because you use swears sooo....?

    anyways sometimes the rhyme seemed choppy, at time inconsistent

    the 2nd stanza
    Theres a war between us
    and it hurts me to say
    It's forgetting each other
    that will be the only way.

    i know this probably isnt what you want it to mean but i was thinking and i think it sounds a lot better if were to be

    Theres a war between us
    and it hurts me to say
    Is forgetting each other
    Going to be the only way?

    thats just me though lol

    feelings are great things good or bad so interesting dont you agree? good job writing what you feel is sometimes tough and you seem to have done it with ease or at least it appears that way good job

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