Hearts afire

by amber   Aug 30, 2005


You are my one desire.
You are my destiny.
My heart's afire with your love.
I want to fill your heart with my love.
We were meant for each other.
You are my midsummer dream.
Our hearts blossom together like the sweetest of roses.
Light my heart with your love. You know you want me. Let's be together forever and always.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    Short and sweet but seems more like feelings and thoughs just jotted down. Maybe find more of a structure :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Loulou

    CUTE POEM
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    Amazing that is the one i was looking for. Amazing job i loved this poem alot. It's so short but it gets to the point of what you are writing. Also it came from the heart which is great. keep it up. keep on writing. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Very short but sweet, a true love poem....This poem said it all and it made me think about my boyfriend!!! WELL DONE....

    *much Love Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Its good one amber... but you can kinda build on it ... make it a little more longer if need be & a little more intense... i like the concept though.. hey if possible pls check out my poem "murder or suicide" ; )

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