Surrounded by it's curse

by Mark   Sep 4, 2005


As i lay back my head
And drift into the unpredictable
That could end my life
If i didn't wake as i fall

My eyes still free
Waiting for a re-occurrence of their demise
Waiting to be shut down
With little or no goodbyes

The darkness stares at me
Trying to make me give in
I can feel it's hostility
Like I've committed a sin

Surrounded by its curse
How can i not yield?
It co-exists with nothing
My room is totally sealed

Surrendered to its cause
The new world i now enter
Dreams to experience
Darkness as my mentor

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  • 18 years ago

    by sarah

    I liked this poem n i like your "skills" lol awsome write ne ways~ i def jus saw that comment you left last month on that every waking moment poem thanks* thats nice of ya.

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This is great! i loved the first stanza! and the last it was probley the best i think..i loved the first because its said that if your falling in a dream and you hit the end you die..strange :|
    This was very well written I think your growing as a writer! well done xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    "The darkness stares at me
    Trying to make me give in
    I can feel it's hostility
    Like I've committed a sin"

    i love that stanza!! brilliant poem, keep it up!
    -xXx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea broken tears

    Wow i loved it
    i could feel something inside me keep it up

    check out n comment on my newer ones

    love andrea xxxx

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