Keep it Forever

by The Poetic Child   Sep 13, 2005


You Took me out of this Depression,
Now i have to tell you my one little confession,

You Took my Sorrow and Pain and Squashed it Down,
Looked at me and shook out my Frown,

Smiled at me, and showed me your desire,
Perfect as Can be, and Hot like Fire

When i was once feeling bad feeling like Trash,
Hurting Inside Get Crammed like a Crash,

Stumbling and Apathetic and walked with a Shrug,
You came and said i love you and gave me one hug

Didn't know 3 words could have a big impact,
and now our love is intact

Every night my Mind is Focused on One simple thing,
should i keep it slow for now,
or give u the Ring

A Heart Shaped Diamond but it seems so worth it,
Shines like your eyes ooh so starlit

I couldn't even Describe the way you make me feel,
Perfect in every way including your nice Tan Appeal

From Physical to Spiritual id still end in silence, because there is no word,
No Word is Big Enough it hasn't been heard,

I would travel to the deepest Struggle just to get a glance,
Play soft Music and maybe we could dance,

Move Side to Side and stare in your eyes,
dance outside and watch the sunrise,

Hold you like There is no Tomorrow,
taking my pain away and move my sorrow,

I love you and I'm With Great Joy that were Together,
i Never want to leave u, lets keep it for forever

*Dedicated to my G/f* :)

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    *A heart shaped diamond but it seems so worth it
    Shines like your eyes ooh so starlit*
    My fav stanza... perfectly written i love this poem just as much as I do your others...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by Gesselle Valle

    Great Job...think its really sweet you dedicated this poem to your g/f. oh yeah, I love my xbox too :-) Just thought I should let you know! 5/5
    ~GV~

  • 18 years ago

    by Spam

    Oh wow. thats just so beautiful............
    one of the best love poems i've read for a while. ur girlfriend is so lucky!