Gone

by Dark Kitten   Sep 15, 2005


It has all gone wrong with one final breath,
A horror has turned the blame on me,
Long has it been since I felt truly needed,
Since I felt so truly content and satisfied,
A perfect story of true passion,
Gone all wrong,
Lost all hope,
Surely as I breath right now,
Someone come and save me,
The future is lost to my own doom,
The past should be forgotten,
But it is not,
I will never forget that day,
The day I lost all sign of hope,
The day I realized I only have despair,
A day I should always remember,
For it is an eventful day of remembrance,
But when other people will talk about 9/11,
I will remember it as the day I wept constantly,
The day I wept tears of complete sorrow,
The day I turned my back on trusting fully with my heart,
On giving up my heart,
I will always remember that day!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sole

    Well worded indeed - great message . . . Does a little more than scratch the surface, and the flow is awesome. Excellent write.

    Peace. [Sole]

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Sad poem.. but its very well worded.. well done

  • 18 years ago

    by Carmen

    Believe it or not, this is the first 9/11 poem i've read, and it was good. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Wow this is excellent...so sad...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Aww thats so sad, but again well written, you expressed your emotions really good, and I liked it alot, had a great flow and was worth reading, I can't believe there wasn't any comments.. great job, 5/5