Hope in god

by shawn hoskins   Sep 16, 2005


If God was to come today, do you think you would go up or down,do you think he would smile at you or give you a frown,i know i've did some things that weren't right,so i pray for his forgiveness each and every night,Many struggle to find his light,many are lost with no one in sight,nothing to look forward to,nothing to loose,so they turn themselves to substance abuse,i've felt that way before because i've been there myself, when you feel like nobody even thinks of you or even cares,so i turned things around when i stopped to look at my life and were i was going,i was sinking fast without me even knowing.

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  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    5/5 again... this really pricked my conscience... *giggles* good work shawn but again same thin arrange them as 2 lines & it shud be perfect
    good luck

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    Thanks i appreciate your comment

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