Losing you

by shawn hoskins   Sep 18, 2005


Everyday we spend apart,the worse i feel in my heart,i know were struggling to make things work out,the more were apart,i find your love is hard to go without,we've been together for so long,somewhere down the line things started going wrong,maybe if we give it one more try things might workout,for losing you would tear me apart,so lets give it one more try,lets start over and give ourselves a fresh new start,because losing you would just tear a hole deeply in my heart.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    I can relate to this one, your a very talented writter

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    5/5 good poem shawn...but u can arrange in in an order so its easier to read & get a better flow... otherwise it was nice
    hope u make the changes
    good luck

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