Deadly Anticipation

by Timothy S   Sep 19, 2005


Watching, waiting with unpure anticipation
Time growing slower, can't stand to wait
Each tiny thread of hope snapping
One by one, I can see everything happening
Losing my life, my love, but gaining my insanity
The rope tightens, pretty soon...I'll be happy
The world will move on, the girl will find someone
But I let go of it all, the night I let it get at me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rachele

    That's really good. I love the way it sounds. It's written really well. You're a really good writer!

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥•oOo MaDdiSoN ♥•oOo[[i LuV JoSiE]]

    Really great poem! i loved it! you have a great unique ability! i'm here 4 u if u need 2 talk! please check out 2 of my poems called 'goodbye everyone (4 real) and a life of total unhappiness! plz comment and vote on them.....love lots, Maddison xxxx

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