Forever gone

by shawn hoskins   Sep 19, 2005


Why did you have to go and leave me here alone,it hurts so bad to know your gone,the last time i saw you we left each other mad,just a regular argument no different then the ones we've had,but this time it's different theres no making up,you decided to drink and drive that night and you pressed your luck,you never even saw the red light ahead,you crossed the intersection now two people are dead,i wish i could have stopped you and told you to stay,now your gone and i feel like i am to blame,without you my life will never be the same,this never should have happened it's such a shame,as time goes by the pain may subside you see,but it will never fill the void left when you died inside of me.

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Hmm...this is pretty good...but don't think it's good enough...well..still think it's very nice...

  • 18 years ago

    by nikki

    Im sry that, that happened but again great job you have serious talent great job keep up the good work 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Aww so sad and soo sweet. I really enjoyed this one and the ending made me say "aww."

    ok here's the problem, you said "as time go by the pain may subside" and it should be "as time goes by the pain may subside"

    Keep writing, I enjoyed this one.

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlee Nicole

    WoW...This is the best drunk driving poem I've read in a long long while....
    Ash

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Sad..yet again but very beautiful

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