A Day Without You

by Dark Kitten   Sep 20, 2005


A day without you is like a day without rain
A day without sunshine, a day without pain
A day without a morning, a day without a night
A day without beauty in the pale moonlight

A day without you would be the longest day known
A day without you would make me weep and moan
A day without you would be a tragedy
A day without you would break my heart you see

And all of this I hope I make you see
I hope there is never a day without you and me

(( go easy on me..... this poem was written a verrrry long time ago and I just now recovered it lol. It is not that good, I know. ))

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  • 18 years ago

    by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ

    Ohhhh...i know how u feel...i really love it...this guy you wrote it for is very lucky....you make me want to appreciate my boyfriend for everything that he has done for me...i just want you to know that u r a very great writer...keep up the great job...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Alicia Biter

    It is a very nice poem. it could be a little longer though. but its very cute 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Lu

    I think your poem is very descriptive .
    A poem of an undying love and hope ..

    A day without you would be a day with no sunrise
    like tears of rain , that would cloud over my eyes
    * Just seemed to pop into my head for some reason*

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Pretty good, Though I'm not a fan of repetitive parts.

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    This is very good...but the rhyming in the second stanza first couple lines seem kinda forced....but otherwise its good

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