My Bedroom ©

by Georgi   Sep 24, 2005


4 enclosed colours.
Colours of isolation.
Holding me in one place,
As they silently watch me cry.

1 solid barrier,
A chance to escape.
Standing in its familiar closed position.
Protecting me from outside.

1 distorted image.
Constantly bolted shit.
A transparent mirror.
Catching the light, and reflecting
The tears caught behind my eyes.

1 million moments. Happy faces.
Glaring down at the lifeless body.
Looking into me but seeing nothing.
Only an expression, staring back up at their moment.
A second held in time.
A memory they will never remember.
cause their faces were forced to smile.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Georgi

    Um.......what? at which point did i use the word shit?!?!?! lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Excellent use of words. um just 2 warn u, u mite wanna b careful about using the word shit without staring it. anyway, gr8 poem no matter wat! keep up the gr8 work! 5/5!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by Sick.&.Tired.Of.Waiting

    I love you georgi!! I hope you're okay!!! XD!!

    ((Great poem, once again))

    OMG! Guess what?!!?!! I think Mark blocked myspace from working.....GRRRRR!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Foresaken_Tears

    Brillliant *claps* im glad your not a "one hit wonder" hunni, all your poems show such intensity and emotion, you seem like a really genuine writer and i think thats what gives you such potential, nice write
    xXxForesakenxXx

  • 18 years ago

    by Just Sierra

    AWW GEO!!! Dude!! That was INCREDIBLE!! Your words were so powerfully emotional!! I LOVED IT!! Omg!! Unfrikkinbelievable!! I LOVE YOU AND I LOVED IT!!!

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