My Rainbow

by Lady Vengeance   Sep 27, 2005


Forever is a long time
And time was all I needed
To find what I was looking for
To my lord I pleaded

Let me see the ocean blue
And the meadows green
The orange glow of a flame
For none of these i've seen

i've felt the soft grass 'neath my feet
and the cool breeze on my face
but never have I seen the shades
of this secret place

if for a second I could see
through this endless dark
that moment would last forever
if only in my heart.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Dracula

    Sweeetttttt. loved it!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emily parsons

    Such a short poem yet if it was any longer the feeling would be lost
    perfectly written
    keep it up
    I love your work
    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by President Dead

    Good rhyming, but i think it lacked rhythm at times, but stil, i'll give it 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    Hey suzie, this poem was really beautifully written. I really enjoyed
    reading it specially the beginning
    and ending. you're so talented.
    much love,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Great style, and a beutiful idea. it reminds me of that song "what colour is the wind". love it

    Ruby

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