In the end of the end

by Blutonium Boy   Sep 28, 2005


My loyalty did but transcend,
Time to take care of you, I did commend.
All that time, I did extend,
Thinking you'd get better, by the late yearend.

Can you even comprehend?
That letter I sent you with the crease in the bend?
The way you treated me, I tried to defend,
But yet, you sent one back trying to offend.

In the end of the end, I thought you were my friend,
But time for the fights, were all we would spend,
But I'm not worried, nor will I pretend,
That all the lies and the cheating in time will mend.

Cherry wine, arsenic blend,
I hear murder this way is such a nice trend,
A little bit a poison, and a long painful end,
Just another lonely funeral, I'd have to attend.

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  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem. its flows really well and the rhyming is nie on perfect

  • 18 years ago

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  • 18 years ago

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  • 18 years ago

    by TheDevilHimself

    Oh thats a really good one, i liked it. great job.

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