Change the hands of time
by shawn hoskins Sep 28, 2005
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I wish i could go back and change the hands of time, the life i've been dealt isn't the one i had in mind, things have changed i've fell into a deep depression, i guess it's just one of life's hard lessons, but i find it hard to make it through some days, i'm slowly slipping further,and further away, i don't know if i have ever been this down in my life before, feels like a high tide of misery crashing into a unwanted shore, i know i can't take much of this any longer i stare at a gun on the table,my mind silently starts to ponder. |
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18 years ago
by Natalie
Now this is really sad. =[ Good though, I do think you could go a bit deeper with this one. I have depression and a anxiety disorder.. So I kinda know what it's like? But anywho.. If you make it deeper.. And like really dig into your emotions, You'll be suprised with what you write! Keep it up 5/5
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18 years ago
by crystal
Amazing poem! i really enjoy your work! you're a great writer. keep it up!
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18 years ago
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Your poems are so good! 5/5 Once again. Keep it up.
Becky
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18 years ago
I wish I could turn back time lol. good poem though keep it up:)
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18 years ago
~*WoW...that was really deep...im so srry if this is ture, but plz don't take your life, things will get better it juss takes time...i really wish you the best of luck and really hope you get 2 feeling better*~ XoXo
